The Hero’s Journey: Departure

Anyone who’s an ardent Star Wars fan will know of Joseph Campbell’s The Hero with a Thousand Faces and how it influenced George Lucas. He outlines similar steps within what is known as the hero’s journey, which has been found in ancient myths, folktales, and modern fantasy/science-fiction stories. I received my copy one Christmas and poured over it, understanding these points. It’s among my recommended reads for writers! Whilst editing Mystical Greenwood, I tried thinking of the plot I was forming in terms of what Campbell outlined. In the end, I came to see the book as the Departure Phase, which consists of the Call to Adventure, Rejecting the Call, the Threshold Crossing, and the Belly of the Whale.

In my own observations of other fantasy works, I’ve seen two kinds of heroes who receive the Call to Adventure. The first is the protagonist dissatisfied with life and yearning for something more. The other is essentially the opposite, perfectly content. When creating the two brothers at the heart of this story I tried envisioning them as such. But in the end, I had to pick one to be the central hero, and that was Dermot, the one who was dissatisfied with life.

Often the mentor in fantasy is an old wizard with a long beard. Early on, I felt such a mentor at the beginning giving them the Call might be too much of a cliché, so I had that character appearing not until three quarters of the way into the book. The teenage characters instead traveled on their own and chose to do so, though there was a character who did in a way give them the Call to Adventure. But later on, I realized that scenario was not going to work. A mentor figure was needed in order for the hero and his allies to survive and be properly introduced to their world’s magic and their abilities. So that original herald was vastly reworked, evolving into the true initial mentor figure instead of my wizard.

What made me go ahead without risking cliché was that this mentor was going to be a woman. I sought to have her be an embodiment of Mother Nature, who is associated with three stages of womanhood, each of which I gave her attributes: maiden (her face), mother (her personality) and crone (her age/hair). This deviation, if you really want to call it that, shows a story doesn’t need to follow the Hero’s Journey to the letter, such as when Frodo fails the final temptation at the end of The Lord of the Rings. Changes from tradition can make the story stand out and give readers a nice twist.

I hope to continue with the Hero’s Journey in the rest of the One with Nature series, with the next book being the Initiation Phase. This month marks four years since the paperback first came out (April will be the Kindle anniversary). Please read and rate/review if you haven’t yet!

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Further Reading
  1. Winkle, Chris. The Eight Character Archetypes of the Hero’s Journey.

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20 responses to “The Hero’s Journey: Departure”

  1. JamieAdStories Avatar

    A lovely analysis of this genre.

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  2. Jaya Avendel Avatar

    I have not heard of this book, hence I love the way it weaves into your post in relation to the writing you have undertaken!

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  3. sharonledwith Avatar
    sharonledwith

    Love Joseph Campbell! Never read that book, though. I use the Hero’s Journey in my books too, Andrew. Cheers for sharing!

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    1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

      Thank you, Sharon. Cheers!

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  4. Liz Gauffreau Avatar

    I found your strategy to avoid a genre cliche particularly interesting.

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      1. Liz Gauffreau Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  5. Marie Sinadjan Avatar

    Funny, as a Star Wars fan I knew about the Hero’s Journey part, but I didn’t know about the exact book it was from. Anyway, great insights, thanks for sharing Andrew! 😄

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  6. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    HI Andrew, I found your post and thoughts about how to introduce freshness and a new perspective most interesting.

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  7. Eugenia Avatar

    Excellent post, Andrew!

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      1. Eugenia Avatar

        You’re welcome, Andrew!

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  8. Aspen Hite Avatar
    Aspen Hite

    Very interesting. I love fresh perspectives!

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