Verse: Rhyme or Free?

Anyone who has watched Dead Poets Society remembers the viewpoint Robin Williams’s character John Keating gave regarding poetry, and how it cannot be measured. It was a very touching scene, and so I thought I’d talk about my own experiences with poetry, this being National Poetry Month.

I first began writing poetry when I was a teenager. Back then, one could say I was rather rigid. I didn’t experiment a whole lot, typically using a simple rhyme scheme, unless of course if I was writing a sonnet. I would write sonnets because I was (and still am) a huge fan of Shakespeare. I had even recited Sonnet XVIII (Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?) at a Poetry Out Loud contest in high school, in which I won third place. But then again, I was rigid there too, because I’d only written sonnets in the Shakespearean format. In a way, looking back, perhaps I was afraid of breaking into new ground.

My rigidness continued for a while at St. Mary’s College of Maryland, where I was introduced at a poetry club reading by the club leader as a more traditional poet compared to other members. The professor of an advanced poetry workshop class later made the observation that I liked to express a theme or idea at the end of each of my poems. However, it was through both that class and another poetry class at St. Mary’s that I began to break free and experiment with poetry.

I discovered new different forms that I had to write in as part of my assignments in those classes. More importantly, over the years I’ve broken free of form alone and began to not worry about syllables and rhymes. I’ve realized how poetry provides a way to really experiment with words and phrases, more so perhaps than fiction. I continued to express themes in my poetry, but also turned to showing and portraying emotions and feelings.

Among the blogs I follow are poets who use their sites to share their work, which is amazingly diverse and wonderfully done. I myself read three poems during an open mic at the Annapolis Chapter of the MWA:

Here’s another reading I did online for The And I Thought Ladies:

And another at the Annapolis MWA:

Poetry expresses what’s in the heart and mind. For any poet, and every writer, their work evolves over time, and through experimentation, gets better.

Resources
  1. Community of Literary Magazines and Presses Directory.
  2. Brewer, Robert Lee. List of 86 Poetic Forms for Poets.
  3. Guildford, Chuck. Stanza Breaks.
  4. Hess, Gary R. 55 Types of Poetry Forms.

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40 responses to “Verse: Rhyme or Free?”

  1. Nova Avatar

    So nice to “see” you. Does speaking in front of people make you nervous?

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    1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

      Yes, but if I practice and believe in myself, I’m usually fine.

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      1. Nova Avatar

        You do it often? I’m always a mess lol.

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        1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

          When I can. You’ll find others on my YouTube channel.

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          1. Nova Avatar

            Would you mind sending me the link? Happy Friday & happy writing!

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          2. Andrew McDowell Avatar

            Look at the right-hand column of my website and you’ll see the social media buttons.

            Happy writing to you too!

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          3. Nova Avatar

            Indeed! Thank you 😊 ✨

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          4. Andrew McDowell Avatar

            You’re welcome.

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  2. lynnefisher Avatar

    Your journey with poetry sounds very natural, Andrew. I had to study it for a while and later to write the formal stuff – just for a wee while. But there were the free forms to explore later and to try out too. I thought I would hate trying to write poetry, but ended up quite enjoying it, learning about rhythms and rhymes. The I came up with what I preferred to read and preferred to write, a non formal rhythm with a non formal rhyme! Lovely post!

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  3. Chris Hall Avatar

    Bravo, great poems! Poetry should always be read out loud, preferably loudly.

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    1. Liz Gauffreau Avatar

      I agree. Poetry is meant to be read–or in some cases, performed–aloud.

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  4. Stephen Avatar

    This is fantastic. Love seeing you read and the background!

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  5. sharonledwith Avatar
    sharonledwith

    Wow, you’re a poet, and I didn’t know it! LOL! Love your sweatshirt in the third video! Happy National Poetry month, Andrew! Stay well, my friend!

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    1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

      Thank you! Same to you!

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  6. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Wonderful, Andrew. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

      You’re welcome, and thank you.

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  7. mcintyrel Avatar
    mcintyrel

    Attached are some of mine going back a half-century to my dissipated youth. The one to Katy was on the occasion of severe automobile accident, in which she almost, but didn’t die, though she was in a coma for four days.

    Lew

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  8. Lorraine Ambers Avatar

    I loved your reading. Thanks for sharing. 😊

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    1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

      Thank you, and you’re welcome.

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  9. Liz Gauffreau Avatar

    For me, open mic is one of life’s little pleasures. Thank you for sharing yours.

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    1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

      You’re welcome.

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  10. M. A Morris Avatar
    M. A Morris

    I’m from Baltimore and attended Towson State about a a hundred years ago. If you ever have a chance to hear Dr. David Bergman lecture or read his poetry, go! He’s a wonderful man, teacher, and poet. I could listen to him for hours. He used to guest lecture at Hopkins, but I don’t know if does that any longer.

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  11. -Eugenia Avatar

    So good to see you reading. Bravo!

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  12. rosejfairchild Avatar

    I enjoy rhyme and meter as a personal preference, but every so often the emotions from a poem that takes me over are too raw and I have to use free verse. I loved this! Thanks for the interesting read, and it’s nice to see you speaking

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    1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

      You’re welcome, and thank you.

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      1. rosejfairchild Avatar

        You’re welcome! Also, I meant to say that I think the “Eight Pawns” poem is very applicable to most of our essential workers during quarantine. And I love the one about the wolf and “Upper Crust”.

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          1. rosejfairchild Avatar

            You’re welcome!

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    2. V.M.Sang Avatar

      I 100% agree with you, rosejfairchild. To me, many of these modern poems seem just like prose broken (arbitrarily) into lines and called a poem.
      Not that they aren’t often poetical and also often quite moving, but if they weren’t in lines, no one would know they were poems.
      I agree that poems needn’t rhyme, necessarily, but they absolutely MUST have rhythm.
      I’ve written non-rhyming poetry with rhythm and tried writing some of the modern free poetry. Writing traditional poetry with rhythm and/or rhyme is much, much more difficult. Is that why free form verse has become such a big thing?
      I apologise to all the free-form poets out there if you think I’m being rather pedantic. I’m not trying to belittle you in any way. I’m sure you all work hard in finding the right word to express what you are feeling, but then so do all writers, whatever their niche. It’s just that finding the right length of word that fits the metre and has the correct sense and feeling is harder than simply writing the word regardless of this.

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  13. Ari Avatar

    Wow these poems are awesome, I LOVED the 8 Pawns poem that is definitely my favourite. You read so clear and well and have such confidence. Great job!

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  14. kaylaannauthor Avatar

    This is great! I love that poetry can be rigid and strict or free and unbinding. It’s ability to be so different for the individual person makes it fun to read and write!

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  15. pip2771 Avatar
    pip2771

    Very impressive and very confident. Have you heard of Spike Milligan?

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  16. usfman Avatar

    I’m wondering how much you you can explain the fundamentals of poetry with the basics of music of music theory? I’ve related to pitch, rhythm… most to structure my poetry rather than memorize all the different rules you described above.

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    1. Andrew McDowell Avatar

      I’m not well versed in musical theory, I’m afraid.

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